Monday has a better bell schedule for students and teachers. Some may argue that the Tuesday schedule was better, but the Monday schedule offers students more time to sleep, energy for the day, and a consistent period schedule. Students get more sleep on the Monday schedule because A period is kept in the morning. Having A Period in the the morning pushes all classes back a bit giving all students an opportunity to get more sleep or get work done. A period is better to have in the morning because both students and teachers loose focus at the end of the day because everyone is tired and does not want to work especially if it's another class outside of the regular schedule. The Monday schedule is better before and after school. As an example, everyone ends at the same time which helps students with extracurricular activities. On the Tuesday schedule, if a student had an A period, there would be three classes after lunch instead of regular two; this makes the day feel overwhelming and boring at times.

Alex, that was an amazing, mind blowing, unforgettable paragraph that I'll remember for the rest of my life. However, you could use stronger transitions between your evidence and use more examples to support your evidence. Keep it up!!!
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