For the Animal Farm discussion group, I had a lot of
room to improve on. Based on the first rubric I needed to improve upon my depth
of discussion, participation, and my overall energy. My attempts to improve
these categories included me creating better questions to create a depth of
discussion, and participating in every round. I thought that through my
improvements I did a lot better in the second discussion. Our group is doing a
nice job to have a good discussion by having all the jobs done in complete,
asking good in depth questions, and having everyone participate. Although are
group is doing quite good there is also a lot of room for improvement. First,
our group could work on having everyone sharing their personal opinions. A
second improvement our group could work on is having even better questions to create
a chain of discussion. In order to achieve a better discussion I think our
group needs to allow thinking time after a question, involve everyone to
share their opinions, and put more time into creating questions to share.
Sunday, December 8, 2013
Wednesday, October 30, 2013
Tuesday Write #7
To the boys on the island, in the book The Lord of the Flies by William Golding, the conch was a symbol of civilization. When the boys first found the conch they used it as an object of authority when it was decided that the only person to speak at the time was the one with the conch in hand. “I’ll give the conch to the next person to speak. He can hold it when he’s speaking.” However, many of the rebellious boys saw the conch as a worthless item, so they just blurted out statements when they pleased. By having the conch in hand, one would be the only to talk which represents order and law in civilization. Without the conch many of the boys turned to chaos and anarchy. When the conch along with Piggy were killed and destroyed it symbolized the death of civilization and reason. “The conch exploded into a thousand white fragments and ceased to exist.”
Wednesday, October 23, 2013
The Hunger Games Book Review
Suzanne Collin’s “The Hunger Games”
Reviewed by Alex Intravaia
A country governed by corrupt leaders, a world where the rich get richer and the poor get poorer. A country where for some it is a struggle to find scraps of food while the rich eat until they are stuffed and cannot eat anymore. This is the country known as Panem, the aftermath of the downfall of the United States.
The book The Hunger Games by Suzanne Collins, takes place in future United States where the country has been divided into 12 districts. The main character, Katniss Everdeen lives in the 12th and poorest district where getting food only the table is a struggle. A “holiday” of sort is coming up and each district needs to offer up a male and female tribute to the event call the Hunger Games. In the hunger games, the 24 tributes fight to the death in an arena until one survivor is crowned victor. As the female tributes are being selected, Katniss’ sister Primrose Everdeen is chosen. Katniss ends up volunteering as tribute and is then taken to the capital for the Hunger Games.
I enjoyed reading this science fiction adventure novel. There were many suspenseful scenes and relatable characters. “The world transformed to flame and smoke. Burning branches crack from trees and fall is showers of sparks at my feet” (172). As I read the book it did a great job of making it feel like I was actually in the arena by using vivid description and intense action. Although the book was very well written, it did have some weak points. For example, there were a lot of words that may be unfamiliar to readers. “We walk toward the seam in silence” (12).
Collin’s writing style really shined in this book. Her use of diction made you feel connected to certain characters and feel as though you were in the book. Her use of flashbacks were very interesting and added a lot of depth to the story. The only criticism I can give on the writing is the fact that some scenes were very descriptive and were well thought out while some scenes where just simple glances and were just passed over, this is noticeable when passing the nights and even whole days.
The Hunger Games is a must read for all ages and genders. The book may be more geared toward teens but even adults and children will enjoy reading it. The writing had an excellent story that will intrigue all readers. This book also has cliffhangers at almost every chapter that will keep you reading until you finish. Overall, The Hunger Games is a descriptive and captivating book that everyone will enjoy.
Tuesday, October 15, 2013
Malcolm Gladwell Blog Response
In Malcolm Gladwell’s chapter of The Warring Harding Error
it surprised me that so many people based good leadership on exterior aesthetics.
It surprises me even more that people encouraged Warren Harding to run for
president even though he stated that he was not interested in it. “He was, most
historians agree, one of the worst presidents in American history,” (Gladwell).
Harding had the physical attributes of a good leader but as it turns out his
intelligence of leadership lacked because most agree he was a terrible
president. The message that I see in this chapter is the classic ‘Don’t judge a
book by its cover’.
This chapter is very useful in a discussion of leadership because
you can point out what you would not like in a leader. Harding was physically
strong and good-looking, which is naturally good traits of a leader, but there
is also a second part of the leader equation that also needs to be filled. The
second half is intelligence of a leader. The leader needs to be considerate and
make the best decisions for the public. When only looking at half of the leader
traits and making a decision we are creating unconscious biases. Fixing these
biases is very easy because all you need to do is identify it and work towards
adjusting the behavior towards it.
I took the IAT for the association between weapons and faces
and also the preference over different raced children. My results did surprise me
a bit because I thought, like most people, that I was not biased towards a
subject. My results for the weapon IAT said that I had a “strong automatic association
between weapons and African American faces compared to European American faces”.
This surprised me because I rarely ever think of weapons and “Moderate
automatic preference for European American children compared to African
American children”. I always try to think of equality towards all races but it
turns out that I have a preference European Americans. I think my unconscious biases
are based on the fact that America
advertises that European Americans are the most friendly race.
Sunday, September 29, 2013
Better Bell Schedule
Monday has a better bell schedule for students and teachers. Some may argue that the Tuesday schedule was better, but the Monday schedule offers students more time to sleep, energy for the day, and a consistent period schedule. Students get more sleep on the Monday schedule because A period is kept in the morning. Having A Period in the the morning pushes all classes back a bit giving all students an opportunity to get more sleep or get work done. A period is better to have in the morning because both students and teachers loose focus at the end of the day because everyone is tired and does not want to work especially if it's another class outside of the regular schedule. The Monday schedule is better before and after school. As an example, everyone ends at the same time which helps students with extracurricular activities. On the Tuesday schedule, if a student had an A period, there would be three classes after lunch instead of regular two; this makes the day feel overwhelming and boring at times.
Some say the Tuesday schedule has the better advantages. To have energy throughout the day students and teachers need to eat at reasonable times, so on Tuesday, lunch comes 50 minutes earlier. This gives both students and teachers the energy to preform better throughout the day. The traffic schedule is a lot better in the afternoon because all A period students leave a whole class after everyone else. The Tuesday schedule does have its perks but the Monday schedule allows students to get more sleep, energy, and a consistent period schedule. Monday allows both students and teachers to preform better overall.
Monday, September 9, 2013
Introduction
Hi I'm Alex Intravaia. One of my favorite hobbies is to run. I like to run because its gets my mind off stressful things and on long runs I get to think in a peaceful and quite environment. I also love to draw to things, while i'm running through the world I like to look at my surroundings and see how it would look if it were drawn. My favorite book that I've read so far is The Hunger Games. I really liked the book because it has such an interesting story. One goal for my writing this year is to have more interesting and fun stories. I would also like to improve my grammar throughout my writing. One quote that I really like is "Seek peace but prepare for war". I like this quote because it says peace brings strength for the troubles ahead.
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